Its really challenging, cause we are actually rushing projects for digital media 2, design method 2 and also typo... ooh ya, and also visual fund 2 & SEA.. Hope i passsss all the subs la...
Anyway, i post some of my screen shot of the web project and wanna do user testing here...
click here (http://celebutante.freehostia.com/)to view the site, thx alot for helping me..This is my 1st web assignment, it is an incomplete site, some buttons are not ment to work.
Target Audince : Young Adults(age 16 - 29)
User Testing Q&A
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
- Cute
- Funny
- Sux
- Others : _______________________________________
2. How is the color mode of the site?
- Glamorous
- Cute
- Funny
- Sux
- Others : _______________________________________
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
- Can
- No
- kinda
- Others : _______________________________________
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
- Yes, please tell me about it________________________________________
- No
- kinda?
- Others : _______________________________________
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- Yes, go to question 7
- No, go to question 6
- kinda?
- Others : _______________________________________
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
- Yes
- No
- kinda?
- Others : _______________________________________
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
- Yes, (thx alot ar.. love u most d.. hahahha..)
- No,___________________________________________(help me promote ma...i know my site sux)
- Maybe? (dont hesiate d, jux tell ppl lah...)
- Others : _______________________________________
8. (question removed)
9.How would you rate this site?()
- *****(Very Good, can earn money d, xD)
- ****(Not Bad, can teach ppl d, hahahahah....)
- ***(pass lah, still need add oil in TOA..)
- **(kanasai, do sales la, dun study mm d...)
- *(sux sux sux, even a high school student can do better thn his)
- Others : _______________________________________
10.How do you feel about this site?
Comments, question, suggestions : ___________________________________________________
11. Your age, and gender : ___________________
What is a "Celebutante"?
- It usually applies to young women expected to inherit a fortune, like Paris Hilton or Nicole Richie who have become celebrities because of their riches, and not necessarily because of demonstrated talent. On the other hand, young actresses like Lindsay Lohan who have given excellent performances in the past and are sitting on pretty fortunes may also be considered a celebutante.
31 comments:
1.Glamorous
2.Glamorous
3.Yes
4.No
5.No
6.Yes
7.Yes
8.A site to facinate young girls to work for them! >:D
9.Not bad
10.'Text Me' doesn't work!! arghhhh why? WHY? Oh and the logo up there need some more design on the typeface to make it more... facinating lol
User Testing Q&A
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
can be better.
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
Not really
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
Not really. is it about celebrity?
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- Yes
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
No. the site lack of information..and i personally don't like celebutante. lol
8.Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
yup
9.Do you rate this site?()
for a person that know nothing about web design like me. I think this is quite okay. At least all the navigation works and the designs are fine to me :)
10.How do you feel about this site?
I suggest you change the typeface. =)
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
- Excellent!
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
- I was a bit lost cuz i didn't know the words below the girls are corresponding to each other
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
- No
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- No
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
- No
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
- Yes, (thx alot ar.. love u most d.. hahahha..)
8.Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
- No
9.Do you rate this site?()
- 4.5 stars :)
10.How do you feel about this site?
Comments, question, suggestions : _________________ _______________________________________
11. Your age, and gender :
19, M
User Testing Q&A
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
-It is glamorous on the outside but for the photo usage and color mood especially on models and object are not persistant, like they are just placed there for no reason. Look for a connection that could lead people's eyes. i lost my view after looking at two models on main page.
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
-Yes. But it is still kinda stuck in between formal or informal. which leads us back to connecting.
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
-No, although i do understand the terms of celebutante, your introduction page does not explained well enough on that therefore say i do not know the terms of celebutante, i would be blur throughout the whole time. My suggestion would be to give a consistent typeface for all pages and talk introduced yourself as a celebutante as if you have never met us before.
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- Yes
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
-I will actually because it is still an intersting topic over here and ppl love gossips :)
8.Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
-As i mentioned, if i do not know the terms earlier, i wount have a clue in your site.
9.Do you rate this site?() -
Not Bad.
10.How do you feel about this site?
-Put more effort into typo choices and layout(i know you might hate typo haha but it effects alot actually)and the concept placement. Most importantly, the flow of reading and clicking. Thats all you are lack at. The design layout and theme is good already.
Also, if you do want to look into more details, change your copywriting instead of words like text me go with words that potrays image more like a high society. For example, your usgae on Look Like Us. That sounded like a celebutante. So this effects, for me, my flow of reading.
11. Your age, and gender : 19, F
User Testing Q&A
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site? - Glamorous
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
kinda
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
No
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"? -
No, go to question 6
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site? No
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
Maybe? (dont hesiate d, jux tell ppl lah...)
8.Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
No
9.How would you rate this site?() -****(Not Bad, can teach ppl d, hahahahah....)
10.How do you feel about this site?Comments, question, suggestions :
There's is no 'Home' button where u can click and go back to the page where u and ur pretty sis Xynn pose nicely there...maybe u can add descpription when mouse over u or xynn so that we know that wat is it really for coz at first i didn't realize that clicking your photo are the same function as the navigation bar below...
11. Your age, and gender : 26/ F
btw...need to slice until so many meh...loading a bit slow ler...
1. Glamorous
2. Glamorous
3. Yes
4. No
5. No
6. No
7. Maybe, not sure if is information is sufficient enough interest people.
8. No
9. ***
10.
In my opinion, for a first timer in web designing you did a good job. well done :)
Here are my opinions on what you could possibly work on,
Overall color mood and theme is nice. However logo and typography is lacking. Should have a variety of fonts that gives that feeling of "glamorous".
Photo touch up and editing are nicely done.
Navigation namings are abit, not-so-glamorous to me. Especially "Text me!" and "Meet us @".
My biggest prob is I still don't understand the term "Celebutante". Probably with more information will help people to understand better
Keep up your good work!
1.Glamorous
2.Glamorous
3.can
4.Yes, life of rich ladies
5.No
6.Yes
7.Maybe
8.why repeat question
9.(pass lah, still need add oil in TOA..)
10. Add more revealing photos.....wuuhoo~~ jk
the btn "text me" sounds like sms to me. Maybe work abit on the copy writing, on the look like us page, it the colour mood is abit "eerie" to me, no idea how to improve on that.. haha...just voicing my opinion only :)
cheers!
11.23,Male
1. Nice
2. Nice
3. Can
4. Kinda
5. NO
6. Not really
7. Erm.. i'm not into fashion
8. Think it's glamorous?
9. ****
10. Some of the part the clickable region is not eye-catchy enuf, like the under My MTV there. Can proof check on your copy, grammar mistake here n there. typeface at the tips about fashion can improve, the arrangement of the text can improve also. The website looks nice. Good job!
1. Glamorous
2. Classy
3. I too didn't notice the words below the girls are corresponding to each other
4. not too sure, mebe like twitter or blog for celebutantes to share their style/scene?
5. yeah
6. nah~
7. yes but it needs more content and faster loading
8. yeah
9. 3/5
10.could use more depth and some images could have cleaner edges
11. 22/F
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
- Glamorous
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
- Can
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
- kinda?
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- Yes, go to question 7
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
- Yes, (thx alot ar.. love u most d.. hahahha..)
9.How would you rate this site
- ****(Not Bad, can teach ppl d, hahahahah....)
10.How do you feel about this site?Comments, question, suggestions : __Not bad, love how you bring out celebutante with the glamourous theme.
11. Your age, and gender : ___23,F________________
1. Glamorous
2. Glamorous
3. Can
4. kinda?
5. No
6. no ? is it a shop ? something about dressing up ???
7. nMaybe? (dont hesiate d, jux tell ppl lah...)
9.How would you rate this site?()
- ***(pass lah, still need add oil in TOA..)
10.ok.. not bad
11. 22, F
1.Cute
2.Glamorous
3.kinda
4.Yes, about yourself ?
5.No,
6.kinda?
7.Yes
8. For your 1st website .. it consider very good. (still remember my 1st website... Ouch )
9. NIce.. Keep it up
great to see you here,
I will base on your standard to judge your work, wish my comment will help on your project, cheer.
User Testing Q&A
1. How do you feel about the site
Overall is look fine, if choosing the right font it will be much more better~
_______________________________________
2. How is the color mode of the site?
Should be there, for the art direction~ kindly add on some dark brown + pattern SAMPLE, I think it will be prefect.
_______________________________________
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
Yea~ is obvious enough, but a little bit big for the button~
Typo SAMPLE~
sorry for add on~
save images at progressive "5"
it will help your site load faster and smaller file size!
cool~
1.Glamorous
2.mature
3.can
4.not really , but i guess is sharing its life style.
5.half-half
6.Still half-half, the design,color mood is nice,can attract people click to view it, but lack some information will make the viewer lost interested.
7.sure,haha
8.***
9.Not Bad.but still wan add more more oil^^.
10.Gambateh ...yorrrrr~
11. 21, female
User Testing Q&A
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
Okay
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
Not really
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
- No
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- No, go to question 6
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
- No
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
- No,_Coz dont know what is it about
9.How would you rate this site?()
- Not bad
10.How do you feel about this site?
Comments, question, suggestions :
for me,It seems like quite complicated...
11. Your age, and gender :
24,female
1, interesting
2. Glamorous
3. Kinda
4. No
5. No
6. No
7. Yes, i would
9. *** (i just wish i could understand it better)
10. Overall i like how the website looks. The fonts can be changed to a more glamorous font. I just do not really understand what this site is about. Mabey it is because im quite blurr, haha, but good job~
11. Male, age 21
Hope my comments helped ^_^ i may not be 100% right but there are my opinions haha
1. glamorous
2. glamorous
3. can
4. kinda?
5. kinda?
6. kinda?
7. if it's interesting
9. *** pass
10. can have more info. the site doesn't explain what is celebutante. the landing navigation when rollover to the girls should have indication on which section it will direct to.
11. Female 22
add oil!
1.Glamorous
2.Can try put more bright colour >:D
3.Can
4.About fashion?
5.No
6.Kinda?
7.Yes
9.Not bad
10.it's quite nice,but the layout is quite down colour.Maybe can put on some bright colour.And the word 'text me'is abit weird>:D
11.F/23
1.glamorous
2.glamorous, but the colour bit dark ..mmm....
3.mm...not really..exp: look like us.....mmm,first reaction is...mm,what's that?
4.mmm...actually not really understand lah,although it look nice,haha~
5.no
6.yes
7.mmm,maybe,mmm..maybe just introduce in my blog and let my frens and visitors know,hehe
9.mmm..not bad ^^ nice!
10.those photos are nice, the design quite nice,just bit dark..anyway,it's really a good job,maybe u can do bit edit on information,make your website more things to read, more interesting :)
keep up the good job^^
11.22,female
1. complicated
2. abit too dull or dark
3. kinda
4. no
5. no
6. no
7. maybe
9.***
10. overall design quite complicated...some of the page is different feel from other page....in ur main page cant really show wat ur site is doing or what is this site for..the navigation part quite complicated too.. need to think about user friendly navigation ..sometime rollover caption over the button cant really work for the user...u need to put the title on it...
1. Glamorous
2. Glamorous
3. Can
4. Not really
5. No
6. Kinda? hehe.
7. Can ask more ppl to do the survey laaa:)
9. **** (no experience in this field, but the site looks cooL)
10. same comment as the above?
11. 23/F
1. Glam
2. Glam
3. Yes
4. No
5. Yes
6. Yes
7. Yes
8. Yes
9. (6.5 out of 10)
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
- Glamorous
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
- kinda
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot?
- kinda?
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
No, go to question 6
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
- kinda?
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
- Yes, (thx alot ar.. love u most d.. hahahha..)
8. (question removed)
9.How would you rate this site?()
- ****
10.How do you feel about this site?
Comments, question, suggestions :
If this is your 1st web design..
it is near to perfect d..really awesome...
Art direction is nice~ur photo montage skill is good too^^
Just the typo...I think you can find some font that can fit in more to the design...
overall is really good~
11. Your age, and gender : 22/f
1.Glamorous
2.Glamorous
3.Can
4.Kinda
5.No
6.Maybe? Like GossipGirls?
7.Maybe? if it's more informative
9.Not Bad
10.I think it caught the atmosphere well. Can develop into quite some useful website.
11.23M
1. Modern but not enough
2. Dead(enhance the gold color will be better)
3. Can
4. Yes, it dressing up for the right time.
5. No, go to question 6
6. kinda know a bit la
7.Depend, if my friends need this inform I will suggest, if not juz forget abt it.
8. (question removed)
9.(pass lah, still need add oil, add water, add onion, add egg, add meal and add nasi to fried in TOA..)
10. - I do think the home page the gal who wearing a grey color dress should replace other instead of like want to create a curious what inside the dress.
- if wanna do rollover effect dun show the hard edge.
- if there was a rollover button pls do some rollover effect or text box.Or else ppl will just think there no button and skip it.
- if that was a frame cover the whole website make ur button outside the frame not hang over or flow around there like now.
- some images that use is a bit over will make ppl misunderstand ur site about.
11. above 23 below 25
12. Anything I still wanna say?
Good luck and try your best.
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
- Glamorous
3.Can you understand the navigation buttons?
Yes
4. Can you understand what is this website about?
Kinda
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
No
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
No
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
Maybe
9.How would you rate this site?
Not bad
10.How do you feel about this site?
Comments, question, suggestions :
Try out more typefaces, color schemes, consider options of suitable treatments for the site too. You might want to caption what Celebutante is.
The colors of the rollovers are abit too contrasting and bold. If you can make it subtle, that would do great. Reconsider the use of words as well as the size of the buttons. Spend some time on the final touches and detailing. :)
Hope this helps.
1. How do you feel about the site
- Glamorous
2. How is the color mode of the site?
- Glamorous
3. Can you understand the navigation buttons?
- Can
4. Can you understand what is this website aabot? **ABOUT :p
- kinda?
Try to sell and promote fashion items?
5. Do you know what is a "Celebutante"?
- No, go to question 6
6. Do you know what is a "Celebutante" after viewing this site?
- Yes
7.Will you suggest people to view my site?
Yes
9.How would you rate this site?()
- ****(Not Bad, can teach ppl d, hahahahah....)
10.How do you feel about this site?
Comments, question, suggestions :
Overall not bad. but i found some mistake :p like the 2nd gal rollover is without lights while other have it. Why there are some page without content text :o!
nice nice gambateh!
11. Your age, and gender :
forever 21 - 1, male
1.not very clear(feel like everything is not done,i know it is just a testing)
2.glamorous
3.can
4.not really
5.no
6.no
7.yes
9.****
10.u should let people know what is it clearly or another way, because dont really what is it about(althought i knew it!haha)
11. im 18(im in the page oh~~haha)
1. special, classic
2. not bad, but a bit too much of color tone?
3. can figure
4. not really, is this about girls' life?
5. yes, as u explained. haha
7. ermm...if u add in more information?
9. 5/10
10. a bit messy i should say, still can improve more yups
11. 24/F
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