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Main Page
- Rollover
Character Introduction
Story Introduction
Mini Game
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Questionnaire :
01. Do you think the interface design is user friendly?
A. Yes
B. No
02. Do you think the design is acceptable for teenagers aged from 12 to 18?
A. Yes
B. N0
03. Are my text readable? (If no, what can be improved?)
A. Yes
B. No
04. Do you think my title should appear in every page? (If yes, why?)
A. Yes
B. No
05. What do you like best about the interface design?
A. Typography
B. Character Design
C. The blood
D. Color Mood
F. Other:___________
06. What do you think of the overall colour mood?
A. It's perfect
B. It's too dark
C. It's too bloody
D. It's too dull
E. Others: ________
07. Any suggestion on how to improve the design?
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15 comments:
your main page is awesome! i like it very much. well balanced! Great work!
But below..
style changed. i think your vectorized characters are not suitable larh. And the boxing area.. . .
why dont u use photo editing. make all of it based on the main page art direction. Realistic way. I think it will be much more consistency of your interfaces.
my opinion
The first impression....it is really some scary shit there! What i mean was the main page and loading page gives me the chill , they portray the feeling of horror brilliantly.
The candle part and blood stain on left side is smartly being placed for the balance towards all the rollover triggers for the page. As piggy mentioned, the pages below, character, story and game somehow have a different art direction. To nullify the problem, maybe you could add the same vector elements for the first two pages.
Hmm, ironically, i think the first two page have the x-factor, maybe you can change every other thing else into realistic based elements? I did the same approach as your first two pages =p do feel free to comment too!
01. Do you think the interface design is user friendly?
A. Yes
02. Do you think the design is acceptable for teenagers aged from 12 to 18?
A. Yes
03. Are my text readable? (If no, what can be improved?)
A. Yes
04. Do you think my title should appear in every page? (If yes, why?)
B. No
05. What do you like best about the interface design?
D. Color Mood
06. What do you think of the overall colour mood?
a bit dark
07. Any suggestion on how to improve the design?
the boxing glove looks a bit weird..
1. A. Yes
2. A. Yes
3. A. Yes
4. B. No
5. D. Color Mood
6. E it's ok 2 me
07.i noe u feel hurt 2 hear it again, hahaha~ but the chracter part reali not consistent to ur art direction.
oh ya! hey, do drop by my blog to comment mine as well =p
1. A
2. A
3. A
4. B
5. C
6. C
7. Your characters design and game is cute...haha tat is not match with your title. You should design it in realistic way. Your mainpage and loading page design is very impress and nice. Success to bring out the bloody feel from a bloody story.
A. Yes
A. Yes
A. Yes
B. No
D. Color Mood
A. It's perfect
i think is really a good arrangement n nth much 2 say...
great! I like the whole atmosphere. scary way. everything is realistic for the main page. I can feel something for your main page. but the only thing is the character design suddenly change to cute style already. I think it is not suitable. so you just try to make it more realistic a bit.
its really blardy and scary eh!
can feel it one i enter your loading page. Your main page is good, very realistic and really gives a shiver.
For your character part, actually i think its really nice and cute but it just doesn't goes well with your theme and mood, i've expected something really horrifying faces in the mirror. ( If you can make even the audience scared to look at your character, that's the best part! )
But if your character is used in another story eg. fairytale , i'll for sure buy your design! its really nicee,seriously!
and yah one more thing, i think that your 100% of the loading page is a lit too saturated, you may want to adjust it abit so that the audience wont feel uncomfortable lookin at it :)
cheers!
i love uour main page it brinig out scare feel and the color very match to yr story.
1. a
2. a
3. a
4. b
5. d
6.
1. A
2. A
3. A
4. B
5. D
6. B
7. the mini game looks weird & messy due to the boxing glove & the blood.
1. [A]
2. [B] too bloody ehhh
3. [A] except some of the words at story introduction have been covered by blood splat
4. no. people knew it already when looking at the main page
5. [B]
6. [C]
7. i like the characters, but the overall color mood can be improved, to create a better atmosphere.
i thought you will make the blood to slowly drop down at loading page, though.
other than that are good.
Q
01. Do you think the interface design is user friendly?
A. Yes
02. Do you think the design is acceptable for teenagers aged from 12 to 18?
A.Yes
....but...loading NO....
03. Are my text readable? (If no, what can be improved?)
A. Yes
Its ok to me...
04. Do you think my title should appear in every page? (If yes, why?)
B. No
05. What do you like best about the interface design?
D. Color Mood
06. What do you think of the overall colour mood?
A. It's perfect
07. Any suggestion on how to improve the design?
Char intro page dun really works wif the previous page.....it comes out wif two different mood.
Forget the mood stuff, u can try referencing
http://www.tinypilot.com/
char design.char can be more horror..
A
A
A
A,for click it bck to main page...
B.C.D
A
opinion part..erm...i like ur loading page and ur main page...the loading page blood can make it drop slowly if can...and after loading finish make the effect of the blood splash to the wall...butcome to the character part i think tht is not suitable for ur theme and the mood ..make it horror abit..and make the background slightly darker..and the font actually is not so suitable..too stiff ordy..mayb can make some bloody font for it like the calligraphy which write by blood ...the atmosphere for the game part oso not horror enough ..is too cute...i think thts all ..^^
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